week 1
I'm in a state of disbelief, i am completely alone on an island i know nothing about. i am getting sores all over my skin from lying on the hard sand all day. my back is killing me from the crash, which i barely survived. last night i wondered off into the jungle to find some sort of food or shelter. however, about a 100 meters into the twisted branches and vines i saw the beast. it stared at me with piercing yellow eyes. the rest of its body blended in with the dark mangled forest. but, by the size of its eyes the creature must have been big enouph to fit a mans head in its mouth. i quickly jolted back to the shelter of the beach. i ran and jumped into the ocean in the mind set that what ever it was that was behind me was still chasing me; but it wasn't.
1 comment:
Great entry!
Your writing is very descriptive, which makes it easy to imagine your actions and surroundings.
Suggestions:
* Capitalize the first letter in each sentence.
* Capitalize you "I"
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